Well hello everyone I know that I haven't posted in forever,
but I just haven't had the time. So I thought while I had
a little extra time I would find something to post. Well please
don't be to rough on this one it's still kind of in the
works. I wrote ( am still in the process of writing) this for a
friend that I would consider close enough to be my brother. So I
hope that ya'll like it. Let me know if you have ever felt this
way too. Any ways here goes nothing......
"Life's
Serenade"
As I lie awake...
I think about all the chances we take...
And about the slight mistakes we've made...
So who is to say...
That we have differences as big as day and night?
Well I guess this is all just a part of life's serenade...
So where to turn to now?
Should we continue on?
Or just give up life and take our final bow?
Are you still here?
Or have you moved on?
So I'm here now, but are you still near?
I don't know what to do...
Or how to say this to you...
But I still need your love...
The kind that's given almost like from above...
Baby are you still here for me?
Or did you set me free?
I need you...
So please don't say we're through...
I don't think that I could go on living this life without
you...
I guess it just goes without saying...
That it's all just a part of life's paining serenade...
Please leave your comments and let me know if you like it...
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Posted by Tue Nov 3, 2009 11:03pm PST
Report AbuseWhy are you calling the friend that could be your brother "baby"?
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Posted by Tue Nov 3, 2009 11:14pm PST
Report AbuseHUTCH, I LIKE WHAT YOU WROTE, VERY EMPRESS BY YOUR THOUGHTS, A MAN OF WISDOM AND TRUTH, VERY PROUD OF YOU, THANKS FOR CHECKING ON ME, THAT MEANS ALOT TO ME FRIEND. I REALLY MEAN IT, NOT JUST WORDS
YOUR FRIEND SERENITY
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Posted by Wed Nov 4, 2009 12:10am PST
Report AbuseDear HUTCH;
As one becomes more enlightened....Love is seen in many ways! You seem like a very nice fella....and i'm so sorry that your pain is so intense right now!!! You have what it takes to not only rise above the pain...but to look deeply into it and add to your wisdom, my friend! Please feel welcome to visit my post any time! GOD BE WITH YOU!!
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Posted by Wed Nov 4, 2009 6:45am PST
Report AbuseGOOD MORNING SWEETS.....I AM SO GLAD YOU STOPPED BY....I HAVE MISSED YA TOO BABE. YES I AM DOING OK.BUT MISSING MY FAMILY, THEY LIVE ELSE WHERE. SOME IN CALIF. AND SOME IN N.M......HOLIDAYS ARE HARD FOR ME.
AND YES I LOVE YOUR POEM...BITTERSWEET AND ONE CAN FEEL IT. LOVE I S SO WONDERFUL WHEN IT IS ALIVE , WHEN IT FADES SO SAD INDEED. I KNOW SOME WHO HAVE FOUND TRUE LOVE, THEY ARE SO GOOD TOGETHER. THEN THERE ARE THOSE WHO GO THROUGH LIFE SEARCHING AND NEVER FINDING IT....OR FINDING IT LATER IN LIFE.
SO HON WHAT ARE YOU DOING FOR THANKSGIVING? I HOPE YOU HAVE A YUMMY ONE.
WHAT IS YOUR WEATHER LIKE THESE DAYS/ WE HAD ALLOT OF RAIN, BUT THIS LAST FEW DAYS ARE SO NICE. LOTS OF SUN AND COLORED TREES NOW. ITS SUPPOSE TO BE NICE AND SUNNY THUR THE WEEKEND INTO NEXT WEEK NOW. ITS LIKE HOW OCT. WAS SUPPOSE TO BE. WHERE DO YOU LIVE AGAIN, I FORGOT?
SO WHAT HAVE YOU BEEN UP TOO? I HAVE BEEN BUSY, SO SORRY I HAVEN;T GOTTEN BACK TO ALL AS I SHOULD. SO DON'T THINK I DON'T WANT TO, I JUST GET TO BUSY AND THEN IT GETS LATE AND I AM TOO TIRED TO....SORRY, BUT JUST KNOW ITS NOT YOU OK? I MAY NOT BE ON AS MUCH, BUT I WILL GET BACK TO ALL AS I CAN.
WILL HANDSOME YOU HAVE A GREAT DAY, I AM OFF TO WORK...A LATE START A LATE DAY....MUCH LOVE MY FRIEND ....XOXOX CASY
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Posted by Wed Nov 4, 2009 8:38am PST
Report AbuseI shall come by sometime this week. Read you soon.
I must get going and I should be at work by now..LOL!!
Good to see you on my page Hutch.
Have a great day. ;)
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Posted by Wed Nov 4, 2009 10:14am PST
Report AbuseHutch! Thanks for the comment. Now it makes sense! Personally I'd give your brother the advice that the past is past. It's time to move forward and there's a good reason and ex is an ex. The things that were bad in the relationship will likely be there again so it's generally not worth going backwards.
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Posted by Wed Nov 4, 2009 11:29am PST
Report AbuseHEY THERE HON!
HOW HAVE YOU BEEN?
SORRY I HAVEN'T BEEN ON MUCH I HAVE BEEN FEELING KINDA SICK BUT IM GOOD KINDA LOL!
MY HALLOWEEN WAS GOOD DID A LOT OF WALKING AND MY LEGS HURT LIKE HELL!
GOT GOOD CANDY LOL!
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY ABOUT WHAT YOUR SAYING ABOUT YOUR BROTHER!
IS HE NOT THERE CUZ OF A GIRL OR SOMETHING?
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Posted by Wed Nov 4, 2009 5:56pm PST
Report AbuseHello Hutch, Thanksgiving? I'm not thinking that far ahead,lol! Nice to hear from you, it's been awhile, been super-busy lately. I like your poem a lot, keep writing, and thanks for sharing! Take care! :)
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Posted by Thu Nov 5, 2009 5:46am PST
Report AbuseHutch,
I really like the poem,
Shows how alot of people may lose contact not meaning to,
I have a few friends lost from moving or growing apart,
Some found again some still seeking.
Have a Great Thanksgiving.
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Posted by Thu Nov 5, 2009 11:34am PST
Report AbuseOH YOUR SO NICE ALWAYS THINK ABOUT OTHERES! =)
WHAT DID YOU DO FOR HALLOWEEN? ANY PARTIES?
MY DAY AT WORK IS BLAH I NEED TO BE OUT NOW! LOL
HOW HAS YOUR DAY BEEN GOING?
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