OUR "FRIENDSHIP!"

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  Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Thu Oct 22, 2009 11:25pm PDT

  This is incredible. You really have a gift. I could feel ev'ry last word.

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  Posted by TufffffGrl Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:53am PDT

  HHHmmm I could feel it also. I felt these two should have been apart long before he got to the point of inner sorrow, distrust, fear. His bittersweet memories of the two of them while together and towards the end need to be rewound and that tape thrown out. Start a new tape of something that makes you slobber on accident down your chin cause you laughed so hard and your face muscles hurt from smileing so much. Then you will see, feel, and act much different.

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  Posted by Alexus Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:37am PDT

  Thank you both. This is a part of something I wrote that is 10 pages long.

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  Posted by Mauna Fri Oct 23, 2009 7:42am PDT

  Returned feelings of ICE.....trying being betrayed a few times along with being abused in diverse ways...then explain why some women are cold as ice.....the male seed, who fails to be fair, balanced etc when it comes to the department of LOVE...and so shall as he collects all of my tears and places them in a vile....for those tears all have a truth yet he fails to fully understand one with that of a SOBER mind. To this day will I remain single by choice which I have greatly benefited more out of than dedicating myself to someone I find interesting to intermingle with as a couple of private lovers trying to hide their secret.

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  Posted by Valentina M Fri Oct 23, 2009 7:13pm PDT

  women need time to be hot

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  Posted by Alexus Sat Oct 24, 2009 9:05am PDT

  Mauna I have been netrayed more than 1 will ever know. As I myself have betrayed others at times. it is just how I see my friendship (supposed) with this person. Sometimes I don't know where you're coming from the private lovers thing is one of those times. I AM SINGLE...He, says he's single??? Valentina the heart does true.

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  Posted by mrs jaye 4life Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:22pm PDT

  That is deep! You are truly talented. This piece is moving...extremely moving.

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  Posted by lecy Sun Oct 25, 2009 12:49am PDT

  omg.. with all these, im just too afraid to commit... all my relationships are long distance love affair.. cause i dont want to really feel the pains of being betrayed and cheated... those guys may cheat on me but it will not cut as deep cause were not intimate.. mmmmmm... guess i should stay single forever lols

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  Posted by gorgeous Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:04am PDT

  What did he do? I read some of your other post ... If you pray, pray.

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  Posted by Alexus Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:06pm PDT

  JAGAWAH- THANK-YOU.

  gorgeous-It's kinda mutually what we have done to eachother...He is slowly really just fading out.

  lecy- Single is not so bad.

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